So the feedback on my first prototype was pretty constructive and very helpful as far as in terms of the story direction and content. The first participant in my project was Rachel, who suggested some good ideas as far as the ability of the main enemies of the story. I mentioned that one particular ability that this character has is the power to drain life from a person, she said that I could infuse the powers of heat and the drain to create one complex ability which to me is a great idea to improve some aspects in the story as it is still a work in progress.
Many other students saw my project and suggested changes to the overall structure, like one that includes the function to see stats on certain characters within a particular panel so that way people who read the story can get some extra background information on the characters and the setting. that could possibly work but incorporation in the scene will be the challenges, I will be able to do it and with more research, I can make it work.
So far this was all I got but it is helpful as it can be an opportunity to improve the overall basis of my project and help me with further direction and a sense of knowing what to do.