The second Prototype I was working on focuses on more of the story I was writing, as well as the adding more to it. The feedback will help me fully complete my story and become the main idea for my project. I hope to fully get advice for the story and use that for writing. If more detail is needed, it will be added. However, I did not get much feedback for the second prototype, and hope to finally finish the story. This prototype told me to continue writing and make something amazing. I hope to make it all the way.